...Eh...
I liked the beginning; I thought it was pretty funny... But then it just got... unnecessary, I guess would be the best word to describe it. "You broke my window. I'm going to murder you."
But yeah, keep this out of your portfolio. Try making something simple, and try making it more quickly (if possible; if you're new to Flash, then 2 months is okay for something like this, I suppose). Walk cycles, simple conversations, things like that. Unless they're asking you for something specific. Try to go for something less unnecessarily gory, and stay away from the sex jokes, too.
The animation that you did do was pretty good. I can see you going on and getting better. If you really stick to animating, you'll improve very quickly.